Don't get me wrong I've written my depressions do on paper before
But do we all have to me crazy to speak to the sane?
I would like to believe that we are the sane
The brave
Brace yourself we'll hit with a little ...
Common minded problem!
We'll just write it down with words that sound as if they are cutting into your ears and down through your soul
Send those words to down the drain because I heard them said so many times it hurts when people don't catch what we've thrown a thousand times until it's performed in a poem
Poetry is beautiful, poets are amazing
It's our audience that give us a reason to write
But maybe if they'd listen
poets would find an happier topic to speak about
Maybe less based on wanting to move
More based on wanting you to hear them
That's just my unpopular opinion
Sorry, not so sorry
"But do we all have to be crazy to speak to the sane?"
ReplyDeleteI like that :)
You have gems in your poem. Polish the more-raw lines and make them shine like this one.
"But do we all have to be crazy to speak to the sane?"
ReplyDeleteI like that :)
You have gems in your poem. Polish the more-raw lines and make them shine like this one.